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FictionAlly Larissa
Beautifully Damaged, Eternally Loved.
Editing and Proofing
Budget friendly services from one independent author to another!
Developmental Editing
At FictionAlly LLC, I offer comprehensive developmental editing services tailored to help authors bring their stories to life. My focus is on refining narrative structure, character development, pacing, and thematic depth, all while preserving your unique voice. Unlike the industry standard of $0.02–$0.05 per word for developmental editing, my services are priced at an affordable $0.0085 per word, ensuring high-quality feedback at a fraction of the usual cost. Whether you're crafting your first novel or polishing a series installment, I'm here to help you create a story that resonates with readers.
I also offer flexible options. Particularly if you are a debut novelist trying to make your way in this industry. Send me a message and we'll talk about it!
Mini Critique
As a fellow author, I understand that every writer hits moments where they feel stuck or need a little push. That’s why I offer a mini critique: a budget-friendly option designed to give you direction, clarity, and a confidence boost for your story.
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For $25, you’ll receive a detailed editorial letter on a piece up to 3,000 words. This critique focuses on key story elements such as character motivation, pacing, narrative clarity, and overall direction. It helps you see the next step for your writing without getting lost in line edits or heavy revisions.
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Whether you’re struggling with a tricky scene, unsure about character choices, or just need reassurance that you’re on the right track, this mini critique is here to support your creative journey.
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I also offer flexible options. Particularly if you are a debut novelist trying to make your way in this industry. Send me a message and we'll talk about it!
Proofreading
Every manuscript deserves a polished finish, and my proofreading services ensure your story is ready for readers. At FictionAlly LLC, I focus on correcting typos, major spelling errors, and minor inconsistencies, giving your work a professional touch.
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Even seasoned authors—those backed by big publishing houses—often find small errors in their published books. While perfection is rare, having a proofreader helps tremendously to minimize mistakes. My rates are simple and competitively priced, offering $60 for manuscripts of 100,000 words or less, and $85 for those over 100,000 words—significantly lower than the industry standard. Let’s make your manuscript shine without breaking your budget!
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I also offer flexible options. Particularly if you are a debut novelist trying to make your way in this industry. Send me a message and we'll talk about it!
